Book Name: Secrets Of The Shadows

Poet: Sohinigoswami

Reviewer: Gise_lliana 

1. Phantasmal Reality

The poem was absolutely fantastic! Really loved the execution of the whole idea and the way the first two words started with same letter adding a rhythmic touch to the poem. Meanwhile, each line followed the wonderful sequencing of all 26 letters of alphabet which indeed was an amazing concept. A bit more use of metaphors and powerful use of imagery can enhance the vibrancy of the poem. 

2. Eating a Pirhana

Very well written poem! The twist at the end perfectly blended and provided an impactful conclusion overall. In the first line for second stanza, you have used "Slivering skies" which potentially looks like an error that possibly can be "Silver Skies" as Slivering means cutting or peices which doesn't make much sense in my opinion but can be otherwise as well. 

3. Happy Birthday to You Too

Indeed a very romantically oriented perspective which was awesomely put into the words. The execution was totally different but kept the reader invested. It began with a horrifying elements but later turned into a sweet romantic moment, one that wasn't expected. Good Job!

4. Picasso

The verbal depiction of the art in the poem was amazing. Few refinements in the structure as well as elaboration of the perspective you so well created can increase the vibrancy of the poem and make it one of it's kind. 

5. Silent Echo

Echo potrayed as a conveyor of emotions was indeed a very good idea. The contrast with silence and it's importance was greatly reflected through the words used. A little more insight into the depths of the poem is required in order to hook the reader. Otherwise it's very well written.

6. Mourning Bird

The poem successfully had an emotional impact on the readers. The bleak future and absurd present were the strong words that highlighted the main concept of the poem. Absolutely amazing!

7. Play, Pause, Replay

Wonderfully written! First of it was so engrossing as it started from a stereotypical high school love story but concluded very differently. Moreover the transition from one part to another was swift and didn't felt out of place. You can work a bit more on the concluding line as it's construction feels a bit awkward.

8. Hallelujah 

A good poem but I'd suggest you to not use hindi slangs in between for it breaks the flow and might decrease the readability for the non native speakers. To add on the poem lacks good metaphors and imagery therefore consider making it more vivid and fluid at the same time. 

9. Risen By Elegy

Though the description of the elegy and how it's sung is very well sought but somehow there is breakage of the flow. The mournful feeling that should come from the content is missing and henceforth requires a bit more context for an expanded perspective. 

10. Summer and Shades

The vivid imagery used and the wonderful personifications successfully demonstrated the emotions conveyed by the poem. Except for some structural refinements everything else was on point. Good job!

Overall: 32/40 

This book has a wonderful collection of poems all depicting different ideologies and themes. 

Keep up the good work!