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These are the result of all the fantasy entries. Now be warned points and mark doesn't mean your book wasn't worth a read. It's just a preference. Feedback, comments and review shouldn't put you down. A number is just a number. Good job to all authors, who joined this award.

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Author:ย WritingHoney
Judge:ย LyseaTales
Title: Imprecate
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 71.5
Comments: The title, cover, and blurb go well with each other. Although, the blurb is a little too long and tedious. The grammar is okay, overall but it could require a better vocabulary since it is lacking. As for the character and plot development, it lacks enigma. The book, throughout, is unvarying and inconsistent while reading. However, the creativity and writing style are fine since it totally depends on the scheme of the book.

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Author:ย Emy_Akpan
Judge:ย sataeris
Title: The Curator
Genre: Fantasy
Points: 77/100
Comments: Well to start off with the title, it's unique and attractive but the cover, isn't that good. It can be made better by adding some bright effects and different background pictures, the colour scheme of purple and black suits pretty well but the fonts aren't that nice. It can be improved more. The blurb is very exciting and amusing and the characters are well enough. I loved the character of Emy! She didn't care about what others said and overcame her insecurity! Love how she doesn't get affected by April. A confident woman. And April is portrayed as the "bully", she has her insecurities which are visible even though she tries to hide them. Though you can add some uniqueness to her character. As it feels clichรฉ. Also focus on the character's ideas, thoughts and goals more. It's nice but can be made better.

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Author:ย pipiwritesnonsense
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: Anonymous dreams
Genre: Fantasy
Score:77.5/100
Comments: There's nothing much to see on the blurb, the cover isn't really doing its job to attract me but the title was pretty nice. I was getting sceptical very quickly. But giving it a read, I must say, it was nicer than I thought it would be. There are grammatical errors in it, I noticed. It's hard not to notice it when the chapters were all written in one short paragraph. The dream journal gave me the vibe from a game called, "Alice madness returns," only it wasn't as sinister as Alice, it was rather beautiful. The whole thing was very vague, as it was merely a dream journal. It was beautiful writing, I won't deny that, but it's hard to decipher what I'm supposed to learn from it or to feel from it. And I would say that I'm rather flabbergasted as to how I'm supposed to give character development or plot development points from these 5 short paragraphs. You gave me one hard challenge here, dear. But really it was one interesting and a good read.

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Author:ย winniephebe
Judge:ย Lilys_cornerrr
Title: Hidden Danger
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 80/100
Comments: So your book was, to be honest very good, it has got very good grammar. Better grammar could be used as well to intensify some situations but otherwise, everything seemed good to me. The supernatural stuff is very intriguing to me since you described it very well. The cover could be better and the title too, but it was a good book!

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Author:ย Intemporelle33
Judge:ย Lilys_cornerrr
Title: The Guardians
Genre: Fantasy
Total: 81/100
Comment: The title wasn't very catchy but the plot was good. I loved the plot because you described situations very well like some of the characters' powers. You don't have any mistakes that I can see and it's truly a good book.

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Author:ย RosesForDreaming
Judge:ย LyseaTales
Title: The Lightless Star
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 83.5
Comments: The book is quite unique and appealing. However, character development is necessary for each and every plot development which this book somewhat lacks. Besides that, it probably is affecting the writing style. But overall, the book is thoroughly enjoyable.

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Author:ย NightSinger-06
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: RENASCENT
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 87/100
Comments: As soon as the book start, you can sorta see the chemistry between the characters almost instantly in the flashback and even in the present time. My main critique of the book might be the writing style. It's nothing bad. It's just not really enough to keep me wanting to read more, turning page to page. But it does get better as I keep reading, or at least, more interestingly written. Throughout the chapter, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors, capitalization errors, and spelling errors. And like I usually said, It's nothing a little re-read can't help. The book was set in the modern time royalty era since devices such as tablets exist in the flashback. It's an interesting setting to use. Though it wasn't quite obvious as you read more into it, the author might have purposely not put much detail into it. The writing was short each chapter, only a few minutes long. It was one of the reasons why I feel like I haven't read enough. The cover was nice, the title was interesting and truly expected much more from the blurb. Professionalism aside, Lord Caverly and "the king" is doing a fine honour going into my hate list pretty quickly. I mean, It's only the second chapter and I had never felt rage come so quickly on a character before. And in chapter four, the satisfaction the dagger scene gave me is quite surreal. The author is actually good at building up the plot. I can already feel like I do want to see the end of the story by the end of chapter two. Great work at making me feel invested, very quickly. The hook was also placed nicely in each chapter. Really well done on this one. I really enjoyed it very much.ย 

Author:ย TharushiRanasinghe5
Judge: sataeris
Title: Rising through the flames
Genre: Fantasy
Points: 87/100
Comments: The title is very interesting but the cover can be improved like the character used, I am saying, otherwise the fonts and colour scheme are perfect. I think you should put a small description at the starting cause first of all readers will look for it, you do have given an intro but still to lure the readers, a good and exciting description is of utmost importance. The grammar and spelling are accurate. The vocabulary is of high level, great knowledge of words, where to use which one! And the characters! Well, I can't stop praising! Their emotions, aspirations, thoughts, issues... everything is described so nicely that one can feel it. It's like you are watching a movie! I can visualise everything happening. There is a prominent balance between the inner and outer conflict. The descriptions regarding the characters, their actions and their appearance are just mind-blowing! Creativity hundred percent! I really enjoyed the chapters and the writing style made me very happy and thrilled me!

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Author:ย avadel
Judge:ย LyseaTales
Title: Of Caverns And Casters
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 89.5/100
Comments: The main area of concern is the grammar and spelling section but not many changes are required there. Followed by character development. The character development is a bit hollow making the book have plot holes at times or just simply making it ambiguous to the readers.

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Author:ย Summer_SKY_9
Judge:ย Lilys_cornerrr
Title: Delicacy Devourer
Genre: Fantasy
Total: 90/100
Comment: The title and the blurb were amazing because they really got me hooked. Your grammar was very good, I loved reading the chapters. The plot was very unique and breathtaking. You don't have any mistakes so keep it up!

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Author:ย BlackRose0231
Judge:ย Lilys_cornerrr
Title: The Bedeviled Soul
Genre: Fantasy
Total: 94/100
Comments: Okay so your book is awesome. Like I haven't read such an amazing book in a while. Your cover, title, plot just everything was amazing. The plot is very unique. Hope you get more readers soon because your book should be read by everyone.

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Author:ย NickfEast
Judge: LyseaTales
Title: The Last Philosopher
Genre: Fantasy
Score: 98/100
Comments: There isn't much feedback. The book is pristine, puzzling, and an easy read. Working on the character development and the plot twists will fetch you full scores and will do justice to your book.

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