HR MEANS HOST REVIEW.

* MEANS REVISED.

judge angybear

ehtNanatea Royal Conflicts, Story still ongoing

 Rules: 5ptInteraction: 2ptCover: 4ptDescription: 4ptTitle: 4ptSocial Msg: 3ptPlot: 8ptGrammar: 12ptPlot Twist: 7ptDevelopment: 9ptCreativity: 7ptOpinion: 8pt 

REVIEW:  I'm actually really looking forward to this being finished, I want to see how it ends. Needs basic editing and proofing though nothing major.Overall 73/100

HR: The book seems interesting when i had a random look through, i hope it breaks the small barriers it has to get a win.

kookie_83 The Unexpected Soul 

Story still ongoing.

 Rules: 5ptInteraction: 1ptCover: 4ptDescription: 3ptTitle: 5ptSocial Msg: 2ptPlot: 8ptGrammar: 5ptPlot twist: 5ptDevelopment: 6ptCreativity: 5ptOpinion: 4pt

 REVIEW:It had a good concept. Needs MAJOR editing and proofing but it certainly has potential. I had to force myself to finish reading this one.Score: 53/100

HOST REVIEW: Hello there dear! I had a quick check on your book, and your cover looks great, it did attract me but i suggest you to proof read the chapters, also, you could try to write in author's POV, instead of * you can rather explain the situation in a second person POV, it'd be great if you use "annotations" instead of dialogue: 

scarlet_heather My love for you is forever. Story is ongoing.

Rules: 5ptInteraction: 5ptCover: 5ptDescription: 3ptTitle: 5ptSocial Msg: 3ptPlot: 6ptGrammar: 10ptPlot Twist: 4ptDevelopment: 7ptCreativity: 6ptOpinion: 6pt 

review: It has a fantastic character description page. The multiple author opinions during the body of the story is distracting. Author also flops from one persons POV to another multiple times during a chapter and it gets confusing.Overall 65/100

HR: As the judge said, do work on the POV's, either keep a single characters POV throughout the chapter or keep the whole book/ max chapters in the main protagonists POV or the author POV. 

judge: Taenillakook

paradise by _sugarita

Rules 5reader interaction 5cover 5description 4title 5social message 2plot 5grammar vocabulary 10twist attraction 4emotions character 5creativity 4opinion 4mark 58

 review... it has lots of grammar mistakes..it would be better if author talk about emotions more..and explain their feelings

HR: Work on your vocabulary, it's good to have simple writing style but some flowery words would make it better. Also there are many random a/n's (author's notes) and they kind of keeps taking the readers off track.

royal affairs by btsluvfantasy

  Rules 5reader interaction 5cover 5description 4title 5social message 2plot 5grammar vocabulary 10twist attraction 4emotions character 5creativity 4opinion 4mark 58 *68 

 review... it has lots of grammar mistakes..it would be better if author talk about emotions more..and explain their feelings

HR: you could work a little on the dialogues...the sentences allignment...well it's rare...also, proper spacing between the lines would make it better to read.

JUDGE: y25_bts_luv

Book:Forced Marriage||Jjk+Pjm Author: MA_LOVE_BTS 

 Category: BTS Ships Current reades: 2500+ Marks: Total: 82/100 For Following rules: 5/5 The author has followed all the rules as far as I have checked. Reader interaction: 4.5/5 Not much but still positive comments. Cover: 4/5 Not everything can be read properly in the cover. Good cover but just a bit dull. Description: 3.5/5 Too short, not much descriptive but creative in their own way. Title: 4/5 Goes with the book but a very common name. Social Message: 4/5 Plot: 8/10 No offence to the author but I think the book's plot is too common. There are a lot of arranged marriage fanfics. I don't know if there will be a plot twist or anything as the book only has 10 chapters. But so far the book was too predictable. But giving more marks for cuteness. Grammar/Vocabulary: 19/20 The author does have a strong point in english. There are just some slips and missed punctuations but other than that everything is good to go. Plot twist/Attraction: 7/10 There are no plot twists until now and the plot is too common. There are readers interested to read Arranged Marriage fictions but other than that the attraction towards the book is relatively low. (sorry if I am too harsh). Emotions/Character development: 8/10 The current friendship between the protagonists is beautifully written. But as there are no further chapters the character development cannot be judged. Creativity/way of writing: 8/10 The author's english is impressive but the descriptions on certain things or occasions seem to be less. Your opinion on the book: 7/10 First of all I would like to congratulate the author for writing this book to show off her talents. The works had determined to me that she is capable of writing interesting and amazing books.

REVIEW: The author's strong point is in the way of writing, one of the most important factors many lack. Her/his english is impressive. All she/he has to do is read more good fanfictions so that she/he will get a better and impressive plot. The plot is the most important and that's where the author got lesser points. A unique fanfiction is what everyone is searching for now. The plot she/he has written seems too overused. There are too many Forced Marriage fanfics on Wattpad. I know the author can do better plots by the way she writes. I just have an opinion that the book is too predictable. It's still not late to make this book a success. Only thing the author has to do is add unexpected turns of events/plot or a very good humor. Good humor is something people yearn to read nowadays and plot twists attract more readers. I strongly believe he/she can do it.

Book: Promise {JIKOOK}

Author: n2ar6_

Category: BTS ShipsCurrent Reads: 2800+Marks: Total: 82/100For Following rules: 5/5 She is following all the rules as far as I have checkedReader interaction: 4/5 Not much but only positive.Cover: 4/5Aesthetic but unfortunately does not match the book's plot/name much.Description: 4/5Even if it has 95% dialogues, it is still interesting in its own way.Title: 4/5Goes well with the book, but a tiny bit common.Social Message: 4/5Plot: 8/10Impressive plot. Not so cliche or common one and I appreciate that a lot. Grammar/Vocabulary: 18/20Some slips in punctuations.Plot twist/Attraction: 8/10 The first three chapters are merry with not much attraction but later the flashbacks will attract more readers. All books attract readers in some way and this book is no exception.Emotions/Character development: 8/10The friendship between all the characters is strong and beautiful and the protagonists' emotion changes written wonderfully. Creativity/way of writing: 7/10The writing style is a bit confusing. She could improve this by reading books (not Wattpad book) that are famous or of well known authors.Your opinion on the book: 8/10The author's strong point is her writing flow. However she/he lacks a bit in humour. There have been wonderful attempts and I respect the author for trying this hard. I would recommend the author to read some humorous books or even watch movies that are humorous and make people laugh. (Laughter is the best medicine:) I love how the author has so much importance and hard work each and every chapter and I will always look up to him/her. Hope the author improves and writes more books that deserve to be published. 

Book: OnLy YoU
Author: Jikookloveever

Category: BTS ShipsCurrent Reads: 2000+Marks: Total: 84.5/100For Following rules: 5/5 All the rules are followed by the author.Reader interaction: 4.5/5 Less but compared to the reads, it is ok. Cover: 5/5Description: 4/5 Short and a bit uneventful (I'm sorry if I offend the author but the description of the book is the most important thing in a book. Anyone who wants to read the book first reads the description and then decides whether they want to read the book or not. It's the same as checking the backside of a physical book to read the description and see if the book fits their taste)Title: 4/5Social Message: 4/5Plot: 8/10The author's creative mind is notable. But the book lacks the colors.Grammar/Vocabulary: 18/20There are grammatical errors and punctuation slips. Plot twist/Attraction: 8/10 I'm sorry but the first chapters of the books are way too predictable and uneventful. Emotions/Character development: 8/10Creativity/way of writing: 8/10Your opinion on the book:8 /10First of all I would like to congratulate the author on trying his/her best. I can see that the author has put a lot of effort on it. But I just have an opinion that the book's progression is too predictable. Like, I can almost predict what is going to happen next. I would like it if the author adds more twists and turns. In that way, the book can be more interesting that the readers will have to wait anxiously for the next chapter to come out. 

It's kinda complicated by joemamaissahoe

Book: It's Kinda
Complicated | A Vkook FF
Author: @joemamaissahoe
Category. BTS Ships
Current Reads: 730+
Marks:
Total: 89/100
For Following rules: 5/5
Reader interaction: 5/5
There are quite enough
interactions compared to
the read and the author also
replies to the comments.
Cover: 4.5/5
The cover is creative.
Description: 4.5/5
I love the description. Even
though it's not a lot, it still
impresses me.
Title: 4/5
Goes well with the concept.
Social Message: 4/5
Plot: 9/10
I really like the twists and
turns present in the book.
Grammar/Vocabulary:
18/20
Other than the few slips ion
punctuations, the rest is
clean.
Plot twist/Attraction: 8/10
The plot seems a bit
common at first but | like
the way he/she creatively
wrote it.
Emotions/Character
development: 9/10
Creativity/way of writing:
9/10
I really love how the author
had laid out all the chapters
and made up creative
events.
Your opinion on the book:
9/10

I really love how the
author has put up the past
and present in separate
chapters. But I personally
think they are way too
confusing. Instead of
putting past and present
chapters consecutively, it
would be better to put 2
past chapters and 2 present
chapters in order to avoid
confusion. But that does
not mean the author has to
completely change his/her
writing style. I just shared
my opinion.

judge: taes_smirk

Late Night Passenger by DinaSamanta

Following: 5/5 Interaction: 4.5/5 Book cover: 3/5 Description: 4/5 Book title: 3/5 Social message: 3.5/5 Plot: 7/10 Grammar: 17/20 Plot twist: 9/10 Emotion and character development: 10/10 Creativity: 8/10 Personal review: 8/10

*total: 82/100

According to me the author really don't have any thing to improve except to be a little bit more descriptive. Author is very good at vocabulary and plot self was nice. There were some points were I become sad and some point I was smiling. So I think author really touch readers emotion through writing . The book its neither too unique nor cliché. And I love that type of books, to be honest the book is pretty nice. Just be more descriptive and I advice to do proofread twice or thrice. It will be very nice. : )

judge: NamSeokie-ssi

Run While You Can by danseokjin07

 Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules – 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 3/5 The cover looks too bright for the eyes. I did not like the colour combination that much as some places were hazy and some places had too much colour effect. So I will suggest a new cover so that it can make the book more attractive. Marks for book description: 5/5 The description was not too short nor to long as well as the description matches with the story well. Marks for book title: 5/5 The book title matches with the story well as the book starts and contents the story of running away of the main characters from their capturers. Marks for social message: 3/5 I did not found any social message in the story as it is made for entertainment purpose only. Marks for book plot: 7/10 The plots were well formed and easy to understand by the readers. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 My eyes could not find any grammatical mistakes although full marks can't be given as my poor eye sight missed some typos and misspelling or other mistakes. Marks for plot twist: 8/10 I really loved the roller coaster ride. It kept me interested in the story. Marks for character development: 8/10 The characters were well formed, the characters match with their description. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 6/10 The plots are written in simple form making the readers understand the story easily.

Marks for my opinion on the book: 7/10 • The story revolves around supernatural powers, mutants and normal people making the story different from other stories. The idea of the story is pretty unique which I think will attract many readers. The emotion building was great there was proper use of pain, sorrow, fear, love, etc. But I will suggest a new cover to attract more readers. Overall I have liked the book very much. 

 Total Marks: 82/100 Review: The story was pretty good and unique but I will suggest you to change the book cover to attract more readers at first sight.

chosen to be together by _namjinistrue_

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules – 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 3.5/5 The cover looks pretty good but the slash of colour at front of the cover made the cover loose one mark. Marks for book description: 3/5 The description was way too big although it did not gave out too much information about the story. But long description are not favoured by most of the readers they finds it boring. Marks for book title: 5/5 Marks for social message: 3/5 I could not find any proper social message as this fanfiction is made for entertainment purpose only. Marks for book plot: 7/10 The plots were well formed and easy to understand by the readers. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 16/20 There were some typos and misspelling in the story which is needed to be edited to give a better experience to the reader Marks for plot twist: 6/10 There was no major plot twist, the story is going smoothly but absence of plot twist did not made the story boring but plot twists will make the story spicy and different from other stories. Marks for character development: 8/10 The characters were well formed, the characters match with their description well. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 6/10 The plots are written in simple form making the readers understand the story easily. Marks for my opinion on the book: 6/10 I feel the story is pretty common. Arranged marriage, playboy, beautiful husband, rich peoples, peace deals are quite common in fanfiction world and at last both them stays together as happy married couples. So it was not something different from other stories with predicted endings. 

 Total Marks: 67.5/100 Review: I would say the story was good but some plot twists, angst, happy moments are needed in the story to make it more interesting for the readers. 

But It's Fun by rDec123

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules – 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 5/5 Marks for book description: 5/5 The description has been written creatively. It was little long but it was interesting and did not gave out lots of details except for the necessary details. Marks for book title: 5/5 The book title matches with the story well. Marks for social message: 3/5 **4.5/5 I could not find any proper social message as this fanfiction is made for entertainment purpose only. Marks for book plot: 6/10 The plots were well formed satisfying the reader with the story. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 My eyes could not find any grammatical mistakes although full marks can't be given as my poor eye sight might have missed some typos and misspelling or other mistakes. Marks for plot twist: 6/10 The book is a combination of roller coaster ride with smooth sailing ships making the readers interested in the book. Marks for character development: 7/10 I have liked how the author has made her characters. They are unique and the characters felt real. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 7/10 The writing was simple with little bit of creativity making the book easy for the readers. Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10 According to me the book is quite interesting and spiced up with mature contents. The characters building was perfect. Even the plots and grammar were perfect. Overall the story is amazing. 

 Total Marks: 81/100 **82.5/100 Review: Overall the story is good. But I would suggest to make the chapters little short to keep the readers interested.

Will You by Fluufy_Bubbletae_Pop

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules – 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 3/5 I did not find much readers interaction in the book. Marks for book cover: 2.5/5 The cover was not that warm or cosy as you have wanted it to be. It was a simple cover and does not matches with the story that well. Marks for book description: 2/5 The description was short but I was not able to relate the description with the story. Marks for book title: 2/5 As the book is new I could not find much relation between the story and the book title. Marks for social message: 3/5 I could not find any proper social message as this fanfiction is made for entertainment purpose and the book is new as well, maybe the author will put some social message as the story goes on. Marks for book plot: 6/10 The plots were simple easy for readers to understand. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 My eyes could not find any grammatical mistakes although full marks can't be given as maybe my poor eye sight missed some typos and misspelling or other mistakes. Marks for plot twist: 6/10 The story is new so there was no plot twists but as I have said the story is new so we have to wait and see maybe the author has some plans for plot twists in near future. Marks for character development: 6/10 I actually did not find Taehyung's description matching with his character. In the story it is depicted that Taehyung is a bit of bad boy and sassy too but I feel he is more acting like a good boy in this story. And for other characters the description matches with them. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 6/10 The writing was simple making it easy for the readers to understand. Marks for my opinion on the book: 5/10 Overall I will say the book needs some major changes. First the idea of the cover does not matches with the story. You have to put a right cover for the story as the story is about both bad boys you have to make the cover little dark. Secondly I could not find any proper relation between the story and the book title. Even Taehyung's character does not matches with his character description. And some plot twists and emotion building is needed to make the story interesting.

 Total Marks: 65.5/100 Review: Please change the cover of the book for first sight attraction. You have to make some relation between the story and the book title as well as character building and emotion building are needed along with some plot twists to make the story interesting.

judge: kpopcharmseu

book: okay, and? by princetaex

Book name: okay, and?

Author: prince_taex

TOTAL: 79/100

Title: 4/5
Eye catchy and attractive (doesn't explain the plot though but i'd rather consider it as a suspense one)

Cover:  5/5
Beautiful ✨

Description:  3/5
Now the description and story are just...different, it'd be great if author could give a little hint of the plot ahead.

Reader's interaction: 3.5/5
3-4 usual commenters but they're everywhere, shows how interested and engaging even the few readers are.

Rules:  5/5
Thank you for following all the rules💜

Social message:  4.5/5
At the beginning i thought it was just about a homophobic Jungkook but god i was wrong. Jimin's wrist tattoos...when i say i gasped when i actually got it's meaning i mean it.

Plot:  8/10
Either there's so much more ahead or it's based on the readers imagination...the story is a good one, but there are untold stuffs in it, i hope the author reveals everything in a detailed way in the upcoming chapters.

Grammar: 16/20
Mere Spelling mistakes and auto correct mistakes were observed, a single proof-read would make it perfect.

Plot twists and attraction: 7.5/10
The plot is great...but the author can work on giving out big hints...Jungkook and Jimin's relationship was kept unknown, the accidents...i guess i would mark more on this one once more chapters are uploaded. Also, thanks for the many pics, helps readers imagine so well.

Emotions and character development: 7/10

Apparently Jungkook seems to change...Jimin is mhm there is character development but the emotions aren't explained in detail...the pov changes often but it'd be great if the characters reveal their emotions in an extended manner, their emotions are like untold mysteries (again imma wait for the updates coming ahead)

Creativity and way of writing: 8/10

Jimin's tattoos...yes I'm all over it, i didn't understand it properly when it was shown at the beginning, i thought they were just some aesthetic 'just breath' and 'control' tattoos...but the fact that they were on his wrist and his emotional representation...my heart clenched in pain at the thought of it. The author keeps mystery, writes in hidden meanings...MOONLIGHT lyrics...playtime...they got me.

My opinion on the book: 7.5/10

Thanks for the audios at the beginning of every chapter though✨

I think after the upcoming chapters, the marks would increase a lot because i can't just believe my theories, also, the plot and the meanings...they're something out of the box, give it a try peeps!

Review:

Areas author has to improve: spelling, author uses comma's a lot...sometimes they aren't much needed, sometimes they change the pausing, a proof-read would do though. Also, give the readers some details, don't hesitate to make us feel what the characters are feeling, don't reveal the whole plot, but keep your readers at the edge of their seat, make them feel the thrill you're putting up out there! Try to use more words, work a little on the vocabulary, use better synonyms and your book will shine out!

Areas author is good at: Hmm this might sound different but...i felt like the author is talking to me in hidden words, not giving all hints, but giving hints but readers are still curious about the reality...though the book didn't have good details, i do get the feels...i totally believe that if the author works a little more on the book, write in a rather mystery format, the book could just be an amazing one.

Overall i loved the book! Looking forward to reading more, do consider my points and i would always be here to congratulate when the book wins one day. It's amazing💜✨ great work author-nim! 💜

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Thank you all the judges💜

Participants i hope the reviews would be helpful and i hope your books gets better and best in the time to come.