🌹OT7 WINNERS!🏆

Hey there!

Park Jimin and KTH category was taking awhile so here are the OT7/ BTS as a whole winners💖😊

🏆✨THIRD PRIZE WINNER! 🥉

Antique shop by MirrorMirrorz

Judge: The_Tallest_Dux

➜ Readers interaction: 4.5./5 Rules: 5/5 Cover: 4.5/5 *4 Description: 4/5 Title: 5/5 Social Message: 4/5 Grammar: 18/20 Plot- 9.5/10 Twist: 10/10 *9 Character Development: 10/10  Creativity Way- 10/10 My Opinion- 10/10

Total: 94.5 *93

Review ➜ The cover is good. But black title didn't suit it. Description needs a little attention I don't really find any social message here as it's just for entertaining purpose. Or maybe I was so dumb that I couldn't find one. Sorry for that. There are some glitches in the grammar. The 7th chapter was a whole unexpected thing. I appreciate that All the chapters were well written. I think first chapter must always have something interesting which could make the reader want to read more. Except that, all the other chapters are beautifully expressed.

I hate BTS By BlackNinjasword

Judge: koo_kielove

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itle:  5/5
Cover:  4/5 *3.5
Description:  5/5
Reader's interaction:  4/5
Rules:  5/5
Social message:  3/5
Plot:  9/10
Grammar:  20/20 *19.5
Plot twists and attraction:  9/10
Emotions and character development:  10/10
Creativity and way of writing:   10/10
Your opinion on the book:  10 /10

Review: I loved the characters, especially Jenny. The plot is amazing. The author is really good at writing, not too much detailed and not too much rushed, just perfect for the readers like me. His/Her way of writing is really good. Also I found the book plot interesting.

Any tips for the author: I don't really know what tips I should give to the author 😬

TOTAL: 94 /100 *93

HR: The font of the cover isn't any attractive or neat, it's just unnecessarily curvy and also covers the background part of Jungkook, i would suggest you to change your book cover.

🏆✨SECOND PRIZE WINNER! 🥈

Judge: PLUM_PUDDING_STORIES

Behind the gates of bethkins by toothsometae

HR: The book is beautifully written, a fantasy genre one with loads of magic and mysteries. I personally felt it like a spin off of harry potter plus the twists, a great read.

Advice: cut short your chapters a little, they're like some 4k words or near i guess, you can split up the chapters and with that the book would have some 10 or more chapters, they're way too long for a single chapter especially for the usual fanfic readers.

Bloodshot by btspaprika979





🏆✨FIRST PRIZE WINNER! 🥇

Alpha by yoonchim_Z

Judge: The_Tallest_Dux

ALPHA➜ Reader's Interaction- 4.5/5 *4 cover: 5/5 Rules- 5/5 Description- 4.5/5 Title- 4/5 Social message- 4.5/5 Plot- 10/10 Grammar- 19/20 Twist- 9/10 Character Development- 10/10 Creativity Way- 10/10 My Opinion- 10/10

Total: 95.5 *95


Review ➜ In almost every chapter, I could see just a very few comments. But this book deserved more comments so I gave extra points. All the rules are followed accordingly. Description could me more creative. It is good, but it could me made in a way to attract more readers. Title is ok. It is the appropriate one. And about social message, there aren't many. But few are really acceptable. Plot is written well. Each chapter has a hot topic. Grammar is ok. I didn't find any mistakes so far. But I could have missed some, so I reduced points. The story had a lot of twists. It's really good. Makes the reader read further more. Creativity is well done. According to my opinion, the story is really awesome. I haven't read all the chapters. But upto where I read was really amazing.




Congratulations everyone!✨🎉🎊😊

💜Thank you judges💜

💜 The_Tallest_Dux

💜 koo_kielove

💜 PLUM_PUDDING_STORIES

💜 NamSeokie-ssi

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Thank you for participating everyone! 💜

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