005 Behind the sweet smile

LiloClasie

Title : (4.5/5)

The title is pretty good. It goes pretty well with the storylines. It is simple and easy to remember.

Blurb : (4.5/5)

The blurb doesn't reveal much of the story. The length is perfect. The words used in blurb are pretty interesting as well. It is written in a way that would catch readers' attention quite easily.

Beginning : (4/5)

The first chapter starts off in a pretty good way. It is interesting however mentioning the POV in the first chapter would have been better for better understanding.

Grammar : (14.5/15 )

There aren't any grammatical errors. The usage of punctuation is fine and the basic grammar is fine as well. The vocabulary is pretty impressive.

Writing style : (9.5/10)

The writing style is very impressive. The dialogue delivery is pretty good and it is easy to understand them. The descriptions of the surroundings are written pretty well as well.

Plot : (13.5/20)

The story isn't completed. It seems like many chapters are left, and the plot isn't revealed yet.

Surroundings : (9.5/10)

The surroundings are described pretty well and it makes sense with real life very much as well.

Content inside : (9.5/10)

The length of the chapters isn't too short or long but it is appropriate. The content is pretty much engaging as well. The characters are introduced in a proper way.

Pace : (4.5/5)

The pace is a little slow however it is constant throughout the chapters.

Enjoyment : (5/5)

I did enjoy the story quite a lot. I liked the writing style of the author very much. The story is really interesting.

Total : (79/90)

The story is really good. I believe the story will be more interesting after the plot is revealed. Great job!

006 Porcelain behind the glass

@bluemountain27

Title : (4.5/5)

The title is pretty long but it is very unique and catchy. It also goes very well with the storylines.

Blurb : (4/5)

The blurb doesn't reveal much of the story however it is quite long. It might not intrigue the readers much. But it is written very well.

Beginning : (3.5/5)

The first chapter starts off very simply. There isn't anything that would intrigue the readers to look more into the story.

Grammar : (13.5/15 )

There aren't any grammatical errors. The usage of punctuation is fine and the basic grammar is fine as well. The vocabulary is pretty impressive.

Writing style : (9/10)

The writing style is pretty impressive. The dialogue delivery is pretty good and it is easy to understand them. However it would be good if there are more descriptions of surroundings.

Plot : (15.5/20)

It is written pretty well but not that intriguing.

Surroundings : (7.5/10)

The surroundings aren't described well however, it makes sense with real life very much as well.

Content inside : (9.5/10)

The length of the chapters isn't too short or long but it is appropriate. The content is pretty much engaging as well. The characters are introduced in a proper way.

Pace : (4/5)

I feel like the pace is a little slow however it is constant throughout the chapters.

Enjoyment : (4/5)

I did enjoy the story quite a lot. I liked the writing style of the author very much.

Total : (75/90)

The story is really good. I believe the story will be more interesting after the chapters are published. Great job!

007 Alex - book 1

iskippU

Title : (2/5)

The title isn't really unique, creative or catchy. It is too simple to catch the attention of readers'. However it is quite relevant to the storyline.

Blurb : (4.5/5)

The blurb doesn't reveal much of the story. The words used in blurb are pretty interesting, however I don't think that's enough to catch readers' attention.

Beginning : (3/5)

The first chapter starts off very simply. There isn't anything that would intrigue the readers to look more into the story.

Grammar : (14/15)

There aren't any grammatical errors. The usage of punctuation is fine and the basic grammar is fine as well. The vocabulary is pretty good too.

Writing style : (9/10)

The writing style is pretty impressive. The dialogue delivery is pretty good and it is easy to understand them. However it would be good if there are more descriptions of surroundings.

Plot : (17/20)

It is written quite well. It would intrigue readers quite well.

Surroundings : (8.5/10)

The surroundings are described pretty well and it makes sense with real life very much as well.

Content inside : (9/10)

The length of the chapters isn't too short or long but it is appropriate. The content is pretty much engaging as well. The characters are introduced in a proper way.

Pace : (4/5)

The pace is a little slow however it is constant throughout the chapters.

Enjoyment : (4/5)

I did enjoy the story quite a lot. I liked the writing style of the author very much. And the grammar was pretty good as well.

Total : (75/90)

The story is really good. I believe the story will get more interesting later. Great job!

008 Forever for you

dwarkaratna

Title : (4/5)

The title is pretty simple and common, however it is quite relevant to the storyline and grammatically correct.

Blurb : (4/5)

The blurb doesn't reveal much of the story. The words used in blurb are pretty interesting as well. It is written in a way that would catch readers' attention quite easily. But the length is pretty long.

Beginning : (4.5/5)

The first chapter is written very well. It is intriguing and will make the reader want to read more.

Grammar : (14.5/15 )

There aren't any grammatical errors, the vocabulary is pretty good too. The usage of punctuation is fine and the basic grammar is fine as well.

Writing style : (9/10)

The writing style is pretty impressive. The dialogue delivery is pretty good and it is easy to understand them. However it would be good if there are more descriptions of surroundings.

Plot : (19/20)

The plot is written very well. It is very interesting and gets the reader hooked into it.

Surroundings : (8.5/10)

The surroundings aren't described well, but it makes sense with real life very much as well.

Content inside : (9/10)

The length of the chapters is appropriate. The content of the chapters is engaging and intriguing as well. The characters are introduced in a proper way.

Pace : (4/5)

The pace is just how it should be and it is constant throughout the chapters.

Enjoyment : (5/5)

I did enjoy the story quite a lot. I liked the writing style of the author very much. And the grammar was pretty good as well.

Total : (81.5/90)

The story is really good. Great job!