Author::  MeghanTwiliaBU

Reviewer::  peacefulregrets

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Title: 7/10

The title aligns well with the concept and plot, creating a sense of coherence.

Cover: 7/10

While the typography is commendable, the cover could benefit from enhanced visual appeal to capture potential readers' attention more effectively.

Description: 9/10

The description excels in enticing readers, generating curiosity with compelling dialogues. It effectively draws readers into the narrative.

Pace: 7/10

The pacing is generally smooth but has room for improvement to create a more engaging reading experience.

Concept and Plot: 7.5/10

While the concept isn't groundbreaking, the plot is executed well, maintaining a solid foundation for the narrative.

Characters: 6/10

The introduction of numerous characters at the beginning may pose challenges for readers unfamiliar with them, impacting initial connection and engagement.

Grammar: 3/10

The presence of numerous grammatical errors disrupts the flow of the narrative, emphasising the need for thorough proofreading and editing.

Writing Style: 4/10

The writing style requires significant improvement, marked by errors and plot holes that hinder the overall storytelling experience.

Overall Impression: 5/10

The book leaves room for enhancement, with notable aspects such as pacing, character introduction, grammar, and writing style requiring attention. You got this, all the best!

Rating of the Book: 5/10

Total: 48.5/100

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