Review by: viekeinz
Author of the book: Shanayawrites23

Title :: 3/10
The title is just too common. Nothing special in it. It doesn't also match your book that much. One can find thousands of books like that. Try to think of something more creative that also matches the book's theme. 

Cover :: 3/10
I absolutely don't like the cover, it's just a random picture with some fonts. No, really it doesn't match the book's theme and looks cliche. You can search for some good pictures on Pinterest. As your book is sport themed, I suggest you to find something related to badminton. A couple playing badminton would be nice.

Description :: 5/10
The description is simple and nice. It does make readers curious about what will happen in the future. Though I would like to recommend you to not add "ex-girlfriend's death" in it. As it reveals the truth about why Ryan hates Laura so much.

Pace :: 8/10
The pace is quite good actually. Am glad that the author didn't write it in a hurried manner. Everything happens one after another so it's understandable easily.

Concept and plot :: 17/20
This story has a distinctive plot and the concept is also nice. It's based on reality upon how we misunderstand things which makes us do wrong things without considering it as we get blinded by rage. I like the representation of Ryan's rage, about how he blames Laura and does misdeeds.

Characters :: 8/10
I like how the author describes Ryan, it perfectly ticks me off. He blames Laura wrongly and troubles her. I hope he slowly understands it and stops whatever he is doing. About Laura, am happy that she didn't give up even when she got treated so scornfully by others. She is a very brave and courageous girl, strong enough to fight the odds in her life and fulfill her goal. 

Grammar :: 8/10
There were some mistakes in the story. I suggest the author to edit it by herself or by someone and fix them. Otherwise, everything else is okay. 

Writing style :: 6/10
The writing style is very simple and it can be improved more. I suggest the author to use different words rather than putting the same common words everywhere. Also please try to show the inner conflict of your main character, Laura basically. You can describe her feelings more as it will give a wide idea to the reader about how she is feeling then. The author can read some other famous books and focus on the writing. Although I recommend them not to change their way of writing, just some improvement. 

Overall impression :: 5/10
The plot is very interesting but the writing is quite basic which affects the quality of the book. I saw the author mention that it is their first book. So please don't worry too much as we all do mistakes in something at first. Definitely time by time you can improve. Just keep an eye on those points I mentioned and your chapters will get much better. 

Total :: 63/100

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