Book: A Change of Fate
Author: Raijin1996
Reviewer: katiex_star
Chapters read: 5

Title: 8.5/10
Suitable and simple title which gives the instructions on how the story will move on or what it is about.

Cover: 6.5/10
Again! Suitable and understandable

Blurb: 8.5/10
Well explained without giving too much!.

Mechanics: 7/10
The grammar and words were perfect.It had perfect alignment it just felt like living in the imagination and wonderfully described characters!.
Plot-13/15- Great job! Plot was suitable and the world building was excellent! No words!

Flow/Pacing: 7/10
Fantastic job with beginning and description of how the fight was and everything.Keep it  up.

Character development: 5/10
It’s a 50-50 because I didn't go through it fully but development is there how the character emotions changes etc.

Hook: 7/10
Very good starting at the beginning

Plot: 13.5/15
Very good selection and the character felt alive

Overall: 13.5/15
You should keep writing and I am sure you will be a great author in future.Keep it just check your little mistakes I know you can do it better.

Total: 76.5 /100

Final thoughts and Improvement:
Since, it's a digital try to shorten the paragraphs it felt like a big essay but it didn’t affect the story pacing but it might make readers think like it’s too much info at once.

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