005  Surreal Soulmate

by dwarkaratna 

TITLE- 5/5 

BLURB- 3/5 

BEGINNING- 4/5 

GRAMMAR- 13/15 

WRITING STYLE- 8/10

PLOT- 17/20 

SURROUNDINGS- 7/10 

CONTENT INSIDE- 9/10 

PACE- 5/5 

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5 

TOTAL- 76/90

The title of the book is captivating and immediately draws the reader's attention, setting the stage for an enticing narrative.

The accompanying blurb is equally engaging, offering just enough intrigue to pique curiosity and encourage readers to delve deeper into the story.

Additionally, the book cover is visually striking, featuring elements that not only reflect the themes of the book but also enhance the overall appeal.

This combination of an attractive title, compelling blurb, and eye-catching cover art creates a sense of excitement and anticipation for anyone considering picking up the book.

As for the plot, it is intricately crafted and unfolds in a manner that keeps readers engaged from start to finish.

The pacing is well-balanced, allowing for moments of tension and reflection that enrich the overall experience.

The descriptions throughout the narrative are vivid and immersive, transporting readers into a well-developed world that feels both authentic and captivating.

Each setting is meticulously detailed, enhancing the story's atmosphere and making it easy for readers to visualize the scenes.

The characters in the book are also exceptionally well developed. Each character is thoughtfully explained, with backstories and motivations that add depth and complexity to the narrative.

Readers can easily relate to the characters, which fosters a deeper emotional connection to the story. Overall, this is a commendable book that offers a rich reading experience, despite a few minor punctuation errors that can be easily overlooked.

006  Deceitful Desires 

by alana_kate 

TITLE- 3/5

The book title is quite common, try to select something unique.

BLURB- 2/5

The blurb was pretty long and had enough matter but you can't write this much matter in blurb. Make it Short and crisp.

BEGINNING-2/5

I did not understand why the first 3 words of your very first chapter were in uppercase. Secondly, the selection of words was off...like (scolding my skin) doesn't sound right.

Thirdly, the description and beginning of the story was fair.

The first line wasn't catchy.

GRAMMAR-9/15

1. Punctuations were fine, I noticed a few mistakes here and there.

2. The breaking of paragraphs was not done correctly. 3. Basic grammar rules were followed. But I expect you to edit your sentences.

WRITING STYLE-5/10

1. No the dialogues were not written, I was expecting more.

2. I think you can stick to one or two POVs for better understanding.

3. I could see your effort, the background details were good.

PLOT-10/20

There were not enough insights to judge or comment about the plot. The story so far was predictable and a little bit common. I can feel I have read the same type of story somewhere.

The events were smoothly described but I think you can stress on your writing style and Vocabulary.

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10

The surroundings were described well and it was realistic but the selection of the words was not suiting.

CONTENT INSIDE- 4/10

1. Chapters were too lengthy and I think few events can be chucked out.

2. The content has the potential to do better.

3. You need to focus on how to introduce the characters in between without making the readers feel confused.

4. Need to stress on that too.

PACE- 2/5

A bit too slow, according to me.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 2/5

I think you can do better so far as engagement and enjoyment are concerned through your writing.

TOTAL- 47/90

Good luck. Keep writing.

007 My Stupid Heart 

by @Arius6454

TITLE- 4/5

The title is interesting and goes well with the theme.

BLURB- 5/5

Perfectly written.

BEGINNING- 5/5

I liked how you started the chapter by introducing the characters, her background details, and a few important things about her character.

GRAMMAR- 12/15

No grammatical errors were seen. Everything was fine and all the rules were followed.

WRITING STYLE- 9/10

I love your writing style. The very first thing I noticed about your book the moment I began reading was your storytelling style. It is smooth and authentic, which caught my attention.

PLOT- 17/20

The plot is interesting and I have noticed your effortless execution.

SURROUNDINGS- 10/10

Very detailed and nicely written.

CONTENT INSIDE- 7/10

The length of the chapter was good.

The concept was engaging enough.

I love your character's introduction and development.

PACE- 5/5

The pace was perfect.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5

I truly enjoyed reading the story.

TOTAL- 79/90.

All the very best and happy writing.

008  Somewhere between love and revenge
By GraceMorgan1123

TITLE- 5/5
Very interesting title I have to say.

BLURB- 5/5
Short and crisp. Exactly what you are supposed to write and the information was enough interesting to make any reader open your book.

BEGINNING- 5/5
Love the chapter name. Very effortlessly you wrote the first chapter. The first paragraph was enough to hook me.

GRAMMAR- 14/15
No grammatical errors were noticed.
All the rules were followed. Dialogue tags were properly added. Well written.

WRITING STYLE- 9/10
I love your writing style. Very detailed and unique. I am inspired by your storytelling style.

PLOT- 18/20
I absolutely love your plot and your fabulous execution deserves a lot of appreciation.

SURROUNDINGS- 9/10
Very informative.

CONTENT INSIDE- 9/10
Everything was perfectly maintained throughout. Be it character introduction or character development. It's awesome and well written

PACE- 5/5
Well maintained pace

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the book. I recommend everyone to give it a try.

TOTAL- 84/90
All the best and happy writing.