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- Reviewer Lilac -

𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 6/10

I enjoy the font used for the title and author-name, but I think the picture of Hyunjin could have been better as it isn't super visible.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 3/5

I do think the title is fitting to the plot and theme of the book, but it isn't super unique (Which isn't a big problem for me since it sounds nice and fits well)

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 9/10

The blurb has been written and formatted well. It does inform me about the plot, and I appreciate the trigger warnings (Some authors do not put them).

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 23/25

The plot is actually one of my favorite ones yet, it isn't too complicated which actually does help when writing (Since you don't have a lot going on [Which means you can focus on describing things better]). The sudden character death (Yui) which made Changbin's attitude switch towards the end (Which at the time is around chapter 26) definitely brings that element of surprise into the book and keeps readers interested. I like how the storyline has been placed, everything seemed to go smoothly and be in the proper order.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 9/10

The characters are really well done, Jina didn't progress fast which is important when writing about mental illnesses. Lots of authors make it seem like feeling suicidal or self harming is a switch that can be turned on and off, when in reality, it takes years to get better (It's possible that you don't get better at all). Hyunjin's character is not so understanding (Until the recent chapters) which brought much more to him, it makes some readers resent him, but it is good for a character in a story to make readers feel a certain way. Changbin's character is also somewhat similar to Hyunjin's. My favorite character is Yui, I love the way you described her using the wooden log as a simile.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 14/15

I absolutely love the writing style, it just fits the book so well. There's not much to say about it other than it's amazing.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 ::16/20

I did see a few spelling errors once in a while, so I'd suggest going back to fix them (and proofreading the chapters before publishing). The vocabulary was beautiful, words were barely ever repeated and they were used in the correct spot. Grammar was also quite good, like I said, proofreading the books will help a lot.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 4/5

I recently read this book (As a reader and not a reviewer) and let me just say, it was stunning. Everything is done so well and the mental disorders have been written properly (Not glorifying the illnesses). I also love your other book '7 and a Half Wishes', it's definitely one of my favorites.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 84/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 

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Writing style

Characters and emotions

Plot and twists

Blurb

Grammar and vocabulary

Weaknesses ::

Title

Cover

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