━ AJ. finally mixtapers, the day has arrived for us to announce the PARK JIMIN (my beautiful bias) category results...

but first, let's have a round of applause for all auditionees(participants), they have worked their level-best on their books, so please do not be disheartened if you didn't make it to the mixtapes.

a big round of applause for our judges too, who spent their precious time judging the books and we all acknowledge and appreciate your efforts.

Judges:: June2420 and MWOMISUMI

ok, the ones who made it...

3rd. MIXTAPE 지식 (knowledge)

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HIS DOMINANT LOVE

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by: REXAAA9

[ Rexaaa9 ]

and

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AURORA

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by: MOCHI_ARCHER

[ Mochi_archer ]

HIS DOMINANT LOVE

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 5/5 The plot agrees to the book's title.

June 2420 - 5- The title is perfect with the story. It actually made me want to see what the story is about.

━ COVER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 The background is good but the fonts used doesn't have a good combination with it. I suggest changing and finding a new eroded or simple yet eye-catching font.

June 2420 - 10- I Loved the cover. It was just a perfect one for the story.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 It was the total summary of the story. Itwas constructed well but gave too much info.

June 2420 - 10- It was just on point for someone to get curious. I loved it.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

Mwomisumi- 17/20 I am in love with the plot! The whole idea is insane and unique. Some of the scenes are common but that didn't hold back the potential of this book. The plot? BRUH AMAZING although I wish it has a different ending since the flow is kina expected. *The smuts fcked me. I cant.

June 2420 - 17- the plot would have been a basic one but the author did a really good job adding extra spices to it. I loved it. It made me want to keep reading.

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 I find every character dominant maybe because of how they handled the situations before them? I can't provide the specific reason coz I can't remember the root word I need to use. So I dumbed it down to the dominance of characters based on situations.

June 2420 - 10- I liked how the characters grew in the story. It was just the right speed.

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 10/10 It was a descriptive book, full of descriptions about a character's emotions and ideas.

June 2420 - 7-The writing style of the author was really good. How the author portrayed the story was really good, though there were some phases repeated a lot of times.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 There are some tense words that don't go along with the paragraph coz it's simply wrong. But that is barely noticeable when the reader is so intrigued by the book.

June 2420 - 2- There were many grammatical mistakes, omissions and typos in the story.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 EVERYTHING MADE SENSE not only because the author fully wrote everything without missing any spots plus the emotions, characters, and events made it so realistic that I forgot it is fiction.

June 2420 - 9- I was really able to relate to the characters and the scenario.

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 4/5 Since it's still an ongoing book I'll be judging the first and middle part of her book. At first, I was lost on where to find the low and middle parts since it was all already extreme parts. So I based it on the status of their forced marriage. It was a little too fast but not the fast... it has a balanced flow.

June 2420 - 5- The story was developing well in all of its parts. from them having a hate-love relationship to the family drama.

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 I also judged some of her books from different awards. And it's always never disappointing.

June 2420 - 8- I loved the story, though I do want the writer to check the grammar and the repeated phrases.

━ SUMMARY.

Mwomisumi - The author needs to watch proper punctuations especially for dialogues since the story depends on the characters words. It'll be bad if some readers misread some sentences because of punctuation errors. Other than that I think this book is good enough to satisfy rollercoaster ridden readers.

June 2420 - I just loved the story. All the plot twists and the love-hate/jealousy thing, just perfect. Just need some work on the grammar and punctuation side.

━ POINTS. 100

Mwomisumi - 86/100

June 2420 - 83/100

━ AVERAGE. 84.5/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- the book is really understandable and descriptions are really good, smuts are ahem, oh god!! anyways, congratulations hun!!

AURORA

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 5/5 The idea of your title is unique and deep since it shows the significance on how deep and precious Jimin and Raylene's relationship.

June 2420 - 5- Its really creative. I really loved the name. Though in literal meaning it doesn't matches the story. but if we see it otherwise, it's just perfect.

━ COVER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 The cover is good since Jimin's picture was manipulated as a vampire with his almost lifeless skin on the cover. It's a good hint or sign for readers to know what to expect from the book's plot. Although it would be better if you used dawn as the main idea since this is the heart of your book.

June 2420 - 7.5-The cover wasn't pleasing enough. It's too simple and highly unsaturated.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 6/10 The description holds purity but even if it has a short length paragraphs I think the author spoiled half of the plot twist in just the blurb itself. This can minimalize the curiosity of your readers as you've already given the answers to their possible questions.

June 2420 - 6.5-The description was ok ok for me. It didn't made me that curious about the story and kind of gives a part of the story.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

Mwomisumi- 17/20 It's a mixed romance, vampire, and mystery-like book. I first thought it was general fiction since there is more than one genre in this book. A plot focused on giving mixed emotions; there will be fluffs, sadness, and mystery. The author wrote that with a proper explanation, it was easy to feel the emotions the book is holding. The idea of changes in location, nationality, and character is mindblowing. once again, the author picked the right set of words to furnished every explanation on the spot and detail.

June 2420 - 20-The plot is just amazing, I loved it. They mysteries that every chapter holds is really good.

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 Besides, the fact that they are all accommodating people who don't hide secrets from someone that needs to know the truth is already a great way as a character's personality. All of them hold an enigma that made them grow on me. Jimin and specially Raylene are getting the hang of being with each other although Raylene lived sorrow in her past, Jimin didn't let that stop them from figuring out how to live with each other again.

June 2420 - 9/10

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 6/10 At first glance, it is a descriptive book. Still, as the chapter goes by the end, I noticed the inconsistency of description as you placed more dialogues without explaining the character's emotion or actions. There will be a time that you add a dialogue tag, but mostly it's only dialogue. It also lacks tons of punctuation marks. That's why the tone and delivery of some dialogues are changed, and that can cause confusion to other readers. Your writing style is average since you placed many thoughts and epiphany for all of your characters that showed their perspective. Just mind dialogue tags and proper punctuation, as it's crucial so you can adequately highlight the idea of your book.

June 2420 - 9- the writing style of the writer is really really good, though there were one or two instances I got confused as to what was happening.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 There are no spelling errors, but there are many grammatical mistakes regarding the usage of tenses. I am confused if this goes on the story since it revolves mainly on flashbacks and a story from a past but was written or described as present even if the era is in the present and the topic is the past. But as the story goes by I understand that some tenses is not a mistake but intended.

June 2420 -10- The grammar in the story was just walah. I came across so many new words. And there were no grammatical mistakes.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 I already got my napkins twisted as fear strikes me, the sudden realization of someone you love dying is a big hit. This book owns every sad emotion I could show. This is the main reason why I loved every seconds when I am reading it. Everything makes sense with every character's fluent explanation.

June 2420 - 9-I was really able to connect with the characters well but there were times I got confused as well. maybe it's because the writer was trying to give the description later, but I think it was unnecessary.

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 5/5 It was a clean book starting from the beginning to the last recent chapter. It was riding right on the flow without messing up the heart of the plot.

June 2420 - 5- The story had a really good structure to it. I really loved how the story is telling us all the important past information in pieces and not at once.

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 In the first chapter, the author totally got me sad and crying as the thought of someone you love dying is a pain in the heart, and every description and emotion her character portrayed broke my heart more. But as the chapter goes by, an immediate answer was given; it was a fantastic plot twist. I will not mention anything that would spoil her remarkable book, but the flow is very smooth, although it's fast.

June 2420 - 9-I just loved the story and the plot, though I will deduct two marks for all the confusing parts and the lack of emotions in some places.

━ SUMMARY.

Mwomisumi - Beside the punctuation mistakes and the lack of dialogue tag, i think this book already has a high possibility to be a hit someday. a thorough editing is needed, the plot is already solid and independent so fixing the punctual mistakes and adding more detailed paragraphs as per their emotions is needed.

June 2420 - I really really loved the plot. though I would suggest that the writer needs to give away some information and not hold it too much for later. It only makes it confusing. But other then that the idea was brilliant.

━ POINTS. 100

Mwomisumi - 80/100

June 2420 - 89/100

━ AVERAGE. 84.5/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- one of the best i have ever read, the details are wonderful, and it kind of gives me a Arundhati Roy vibes!! congratulations!!

2nd. MIXTAPE 열정 (passion)

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NEVERMIND

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by: JUST-TAESING

[ just-taesing ]

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 4/5 The title doesn't really give the main idea of the book but it's a part of it, i guess? I just think there would be more eye-catching titles and something a little more connected to the main idea of the book.

June 2420 - 5- Really nice choice of word by the author. I can see why she choose it. Perfect

━ COVER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 The cover is convincing that the book will be have tons of conflicts in the future updates. But it would be nice to add an image of the female lead too.

June 2420 - 7- Its good, but it can be a little better.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 The description is written neatly, and the length is enough to show the background story or given hints on Jimin and the female lead's life.

June 2420 - 9- I was really curious after reading the description. It really made me want to read further.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

Mwomisumi- 17/20 I am in love with the plot! The whole idea is insane and unique. Some of the scenes are common but that didn't hold back the potential of this book. The plot? BRUH AMAZING although I wish it has a different ending since the flow is kina expected. *The smuts fcked me. I cant.

June 2420 - 20- I loved the message, the idea, the plot. On point. Its a must read

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 16/20 This book has many plot twists and obstacles placed for the characters in the future chapters. The idea of it is good, as the author slowly prepares the main and support characters towards some personal development.

June 2420 - 10- The character development was really on the right pace. The writer made some serious effort writing it.

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 Yes, the character's background are showed especially how they struggled physically and mentally. Their healing will be possibly based on how they conquer every problem and solve it together.

June 2420 - 10- I loved how the author writes the story. I was deep into the story and didn't even realise that its over.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 There were some confusions on some past and present tenses used on some paragraphs, so it was a little bit hard to know if they are talking about a certain thing about the past or it is just a simple error.

June 2420 - 9- tiny bit of missing punctuation but I think it can be ignored.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 Since the first chapter I already saw how well the female character's emotion was portrayed and written. By then, i knew that future heavy expressions are easy to be portrayed not only because the author is good but the way their background story was made.

June 2420 - 10- I could really feel their emotions well in my mind. It was really well written

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 5/5 I gave a perfect score because the flow is balanced which made the beginning, middle and the end of the story more predictable in a good way.

June 2420 - 5- It was just on point. Loved how the work was done

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 The cover didn't excite me aswell as thetitle and description because I have no idea on how to arrange the piececorrectly

June 2420 - 10- Just 2 words 'Loved it'

━ SUMMARY.

Mwomisumi - I am really impressed by the book. It really is one of the must reads. The plot, the execution, everything was just perfect. I am really impressed on how the writer was able to put down a story so perfectly. One can really feel every part of the story. I really loved the poster as well, but it kind of gave me a tiny bit of unreal vibes, due to the image of Jimin used. It could be just him without the blood will make it more realistic.

June 2420 - The story is really a must read. I really enjoyed the story. The message was also really good. I really appreciate the effort, the writer puts in writing her story.

━ POINTS. 100

Mwomisumi - 81/100

June 2420 - 95/100

━ AVERAGE. 88/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- okay, imma be honest af, i have read this a lot of times and it never fails to disappoint me, a beautiful piece of work, so keep it up!! congratulations!!

1st. MIXTAPE 사랑 (love)

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THE BLUETIES AND THE BEASTS

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by: EVERYDAY DREAMING XXI

[ everydaydreamingxxi ]

━ TITLE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 4/5 The idea of the title is common but the writer made it unique by changing 'beauty' to 'blueties'. I think that's creative.

June 2420 - 5- The title is perfect. It was really mysterious, and made me want to check the story out.

━ COVER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 The bg is well edited and the picture of Jimin goes along well with it and the wolf too. The fonts used is not that attractive and doesn't fully match the cover but it looks neat.

June 2420 - 8-The cover is really good. The Idea was on point. though picture of Jimin looked a little unreal. But the beast on the poster, great.

━ DESCRIPTION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 9/10 The description is highly detailed and has the proper amount of words needed to fully describe the whole book without spoiling what is the head idea of it.

June 2420 - 9- It is a brief explanation of the the basics of the plot, that we are about to read. It did really made me want to read the story.

━ PLOT. 20 pts.

Mwomisumi- 17/20 This book fluttered me because I think the author wrote the medieval theme like perfectly (idk if this is the theme but this is based on what i imagined) The flow is slow but not slow as in boring though there are times that I got confused and mixed up scenarios. There was a tremendous amount of excitement in every chapter, Good job on balancing that well.

June 2420 - 20- The plot was superb. It was really different and unique. i really really loved the idea of the story.

━ CHARACTER. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 10/10 All of the characters played their role well, I mean everyone has the right amount of spotlight as they work together as a team. Their moves, strategies and words showed the readers on what kind of character they ara portraying.

June 2420 - 10-The characters were really strongly built. Every detail was so well explained that I lost track of time. I was really able to visualize what I was reading.

━ WRITING STYLE. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 8/10 The length of every chapter is very long I think it exceeds to 3k words which is quite impressive. Since it is a descriptive book, it is right for the length to be long, plus the author can't miss anything since it looks like every detail is provided in every chapter.

June 2420 - 10- The writer is just amazing at her work. The story was very well explained. The fight scenes were so perfect, that I could actually visualize the whole scene in my mind.

━ GRAMMAR & SPELLING. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 There are a lot of grammatical mistakes, if you read it slow you'll notice it but if the reader skimmed read the book then they would miss it especially some important parts. Spelling mistakes are normal and can be edited.

June 2420 - 10- I can see a lot of effort and time was given in writing the story. I personally found no mistakes anywhere.

━ SENSE AND EMOTIONS. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 Since I've said that this book is descriptive, on its description it highlights every character's emotion and feelings. The author wrote everything well.

June 2420 - 10- The feels of the book was just on point. The pace of the story was just perfect. I was actually anxious whenever Jimin or any one was on the battleground.

━ STRUCTURE. 5 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 It is still short in its updating chapters even if every chapter consists of a massive length description. There is still no ending and I believe the story is still on its way to the middle part of the story.

June 2420 - 5-The structure of the story just makes it perfect.

━ IMPRESSION. 10 pts.

Mwomisumi - 7/10 The cover didn't excite me aswell as the title and description because I have no idea on how to arrange the piece correctly

June 2420 - 9- I am really impressed by the book.

━ SUMMARY.

Mwomisumi - 10/10 Based on the cover and blurb, I already know that this book is gonna be a blast.

June 2420 - It really is one of the must reads. The plot, the execution, everything was just perfect. I am really impressed on how the writer was able to put down a story so perfectly. One can really feel every part of the story. I really loved the poster as well, but it kind of gave me a tiny bit of unreal vibes, due to the image of Jimin used. It could be just him without the blood will make it more realistic.

━ POINTS. 100

Mwomisumi - 87/100

June 2420 - 96/100

━ AVERAGE. 91.5/ 100

━ HOST REVIEW

AJ- idk why i haven't found this book before, it is amazing. umm, kinda flustered cause it is a jimin book and my ahem name is ARA, loll. but the scenes and development is perfect, you deserve this so much!! congratulations!!

the rest of the marks are...

━ AJ.

congratulations to the ones who made it, good luck to other participants, and thanks to our judges...

okay, so i made small changes in the marks above, as i thought!! some ppl were given zero which you do not deserve, it is not maths!! (i m good at maths tho). so in the reviews, the marks may be different a bit from here!! don't consider that, consider this. i didn't make any changes in mwomisumi's marks but some changes in june2420's mark only!! :)

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