River

Name - RiverAge - 10Gender - FemaleTribe - RainWings cool! Two rainwings in a row :DAppearance - Normal RainWing scale shifting, but her 'resting colour' I guess you could say is hot pink, with green highlights, and she has two dark blue spots over both eyes, which she can't get rid of. She's unusually small for her age and very thin. Her claws are short but her talons are quite large. She had an extremely long tail, long horns and her eyes are ocean blue.

Personality - River has anxiety. She is shy around dragons she has either never met, or isn't very close to. But when she's around friends, she is wild and crazy very happy. She is a bit clingy, but this is because past friendships haven't gone very well, and she's afraid to lose anymore friends. She is also very opinionated, always speaking her mind, but only in front of friends and family, due to the anxiety.

Abilities - River had amazing aim with her venom, and she is very fast and since she is so small, she is better at hiding than most RainWings. She also has very good camouflage, helping her good hiding. Occupation - Fruit gatherer in the rain forest.Residency - Rain forestFamily - Her Mother's name is Monkey, her Father's name is Sloth and she has two sisters: Flood (older) and Ivy (younger)Backstory - River is one if the first RainWings, and is related to the first. Her anxiety stemmed from being bullied, due to her two dark spots over her eyes. She hasn't had a very interesting life so far, but her friendships before her most recent ones have failed, and she blames herself for these falling outs.Other - River is an animus, but she doesn't know it yet. Bisexual So she is one of the first Animus dragons too? Cool!

Good:

River is Well thought out! Great job on her personality! I've never seen an Of from Ancient Pyrri a before, most are adults  around the time 


Bad/how to improve:

Her background is a little Vague. I know you said she didn't have much of a backstory, but Since she is one of the first rainwings, maybe you could include part of  her life style, what was it like to be one f the first rainwings?

Overall: 9.5\10



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