the softness of the sky was dissolving / 

and the clouds were sailing in slow motion / 

when sin, (impersonated as a million other enigmas) / 

knocked on the door of every person in the blue suburbia / 

precisely seven times / and got welcomed in an open embrace.

did i forget to mention that all the chapters are super short? this was originally intended to be a poem so each chapter is like around 50 words. the longest chapter being 72 words long, the shortest one being 14 words long. 11 chapters, eleven stanzas. 

what do you think of this so far?