Newt I got up and went into the bath room I looked in the mirror to see dark purple for pain I saw blood in my ears I touched it a cryed out in pain I went to the shower grabbed a rag and ran it over the water I went out side the bathroom and sat on my bed and pressed it on my head I yelled in pain Newt looked at me with worry "please help" he walked over and grabbed the towel he put it to my head and I grabbed his free hand and squeezed his hand "sorry" "all done" he set down and I got up but he grabbed my hand "I'm in lo e with you cinder" I pulled away"I don't no" and ran towards the door.

I saw food and grabbed some bag and went were everyone was sitting there was a man White suit with a desk and a chair Reading a book he looked for miller I went to see who he was when a shock went tree me and I feel on my but the boy laphed the an turned around "dad" I said i got up and stumbled forward "go sit down I'm not talking tell well15 minutes" *dad why are you here* I said in my hand *15 minutes and you'll becomeimg with me* *no* it went silent as I started to walk backwards "get out of my head"

〰 Thomas P.O.V〰

"Get out of my head " I heard from her I gelled her up right she closed her eyes and her hair turned black like her hair lost her flame she turns pail she opened her eyes and they were black "hello Thom I'm well what do you call it Cinderella" she jumped up and grabbed a Apple and bit it right in my face "ya know inside I really like Newt. It the old me liked you I mean who wouldn't with that smile your perfect hair your sweet but Newt I don't know his like me"
I was hurt "too Thom don't cry the old me wouldnt say that but we'll she's lost" tears started to for her eyes her hair started Togo back to fire "Thom do t trust me " and she walked into the wall to ratman "hello daddy" "hello ci der or should I say Cinderella" "I'm cinder" she slaped him but he locked her in a chair "so we start" he grabbed a folder and opened it "the schorch trails you all have the flare and are going crazy you have two weeks to get to the save haven 100 miles North good luck" the wall went blurry and they were gone

Cinders P.O.V

I sat there looking at Thomas at Thomas tears started to roll down my cheeks and then I remeberd there's a knife in the back pocket of my shorts I grabbed it and started to cut the rope and I got up and slaped him he trapped me in a chair and talked I st there and looked at Thomas and the wall dispersed.

I wook up in a white room with a dresser the dresser had a note on it *put on on and put the rest in the bag* I pulled it was full of dresses and one running owfet I put a red dress on that looked like fire I packed the rest and I tube started talking 'get in' I walked into the tube with my bag it closed and people In white uniforms "good luck in the scorch miss cinder the boys are about 20 minutes behind you there will be weapons up there" the plat form started to rise I looked up to see bright light it got hot I reached the top and there were biw and arows plus knifes all around me I saw people walking towards me they would be here in about 15 minutes I grabbed some weapons and started to go towards them.
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