The 84th

By: RitaKays

Genre: Science Fiction

Rating: 3.75/5

Reviewer: ThoughtfulSushi

Review:

This is an intriguing and highly creative read! Somehow you have melded science fiction and teen fiction together to capture an intense high-school experience!

I've never read anything quite like this. The Mods remind me of the abstractness of the fashion in The Hunger Games while wondering if everyone isn't some kind of android.

From your summary, I wasn't expecting to be reading 26ish chapters of slice of 2099 life from a high schoolers point of view. There is nothing wrong with it but if a reader has read your book description they aren't introduced to the mystery until chapter 24ish.

Your world is so creative! I was a little disappointed that you weren't more descriptive in describing it. Your story has a lot of dialogue, some inner thinking, and almost no description. You've described characters appearances and some of the houses they live in but not much of the actual world. Do people walk places, do automobiles still function, is the color of the sky different because of the pollution?

I read everything and I only do that if I enjoy the book. I feel like with the addition of detail and description this could be an even better novel! I'll be following this story as you update and look forward to learning more about your world if you choose to add in the details and description!