Lovefool  -  Twinning94 

JUDGE: makcheetah
I loved this book. The grammar was perfect, I couldn't find any wrong spellings, bad phrases or anything. The story was a tad bit cliche, with the shy girl and popular guy scenario, but I like how you interpreted the blog into it, making it more original. It was a great page turner, the flow was amazing and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!!

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
I really enjoyed reading this book they're were no noticeable errors which made it better to read. I think I can say it was a little cliche but you made it yours by adding the blog bits. The character were good and the book had a great flow

Meant To Be (Love Story) - faty_n_ 

JUDGE: makcheetah
The plot line was very cliché, I could almost predict everything that was going to happen. The forced marriage, the groom and bride not liking each other, then actually falling in Love etc. What really killed it for me was the grammar. I couldn't focus on the plot line, because there were more grammatical mistakes then correct ones. I realize that you do say how there are many errors and to read at your own risk, but grammar makes up a lot of what interest readers. Fixing those errors (like capitalizing your I's) will help make your work flow so much easier. I did like how you interpreted the different languages. The character development needs a little push. I want to know a little more about the main characters.

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
I'm sorry but there were a lot of grammatical errors and it made it a little cringy to read if I'm every other sentence there was a spelling mistake or a grammatical one. It was a very predictable story line so even if you did stick to it you could've added bits to make it your own. The character building was okay and the writing style needs to have a little bit of work done.

The Girl At The Last - crazypoodle 

JUDGE: makcheetah
I loved this book! It was a total page turner. The characters are very relatable and it's refreshing to see how they both struggle in their own world. There were some grammar mistakes like spelling, but it still flowed perfectly. I loved the sarcastic humor and plot line. Fantastic job!

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
I really enjoyed it I'm a huge cliche fan and the writing just made me want to carry on reading

Transitions - blackbearrrr

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
Nice story line maybe if she had a proper flow it would make the book more enjoyable

JUDGE: makcheetah
This book was good. I liked the originality in it. However the plot line moved very quickly. Like the main characters met, and like within an hour they were practically dating. I feel like there should have been some more time. There should have been some more detail in each chapter as well. Other than that good job!

What is MAck  -  MAckMalice

JUDGE: makcheetah
This book was ok. I couldn't really get into it however. Based on the first five chapters the plot line was smooth, and was intriguing to see what would happen. The grammar was alright, there needs to be some spacing between each dialogue. There were a lot of characters, which is ok, but they can sometimes get confusing. Good job!

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
Good was okay and they're were a few noticeable errors but they're wasn't many to make it cringy. I can say that it was sort of predictable and they're were quite a few characters which made it confusing at time but over all the flow was okay

His Beanie Girl - luckyGoody12  

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
book has a nice sort of flow but was too predictable

JUDGE: makcheetah
The first few chapters were really cute. A little cliché, but overall nice. There were some grammatical errors, but not many

Royals - bluntpencils

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
like the story plot and love the cliche scenes but maybe if the book is edited properly it'll be better.

JUDGE: anonymous
Grammar: Perfect. No grammatical errors. No incorrect use of punctuation. No typo errors.
Uniqueness: Only a few similarities to the typical story of the genre
Character: A few slip ups on character discovery
Writing: Inventive but slightly confusing
Enjoyment: I liked it

Clueless - sweetly_sadistic_   

JUDGE: Cray-CrayReading
I really enjoyed reading even though there are some grammatical mistakes. This book deserves to get noticed.

JUDGE: makcheetah
This book was really good. The writing was bubbly and flowed great. The plot moved at a steady pace and the character was relatable. Can't wait to read more!

Escape Route - teller2    

JUDGE: anonymous
The first part of your story almost got me hooked but the "*flashback* *end of flashback*" is just too cringy. The content itself is fine, it's just the way you illustrate the flashback is the problem. Again, maybe it's just me. Maybe try finding another way to say it's a flashback? One thing that I liked about your story is that it has a mystery-ish vibe in it. Your points are almost perfect but I have to deduct a two or three on the writing style.

JUDGE: makcheetah
really like this book. The grammar and writing flow were very good. The uniqueness was there, only passing slightly over the cliché line, but not by much. The characters were interesting, and I'm excited to see their total development. For only having seven chapters, it is really good so far. Keep up the good work!

On The Rebound  -  squishieshnoofus   

JUDGE: anonymous
Not surprised why your book won so many awards. This is one of my most decent reads in this competition! Writing style is good. I was nervous when I read that part where she used a mirror, thought u gonna start describing the characters image in the mirror, but you didn't. So yey, finally something not so predictable.

JUDGE: makcheetah
Based on the first 10 chapters (will be reading more though):
I loved this book! It is a cute little teen romance with a twist on it. I loved how it was funny and relatable, making it pretty unique in my opinion. The character backgrounds were strong. The writing flowed great. There were some grammatical errors, but it didn't really affect the overall plot line. Keep up the good work!

Bad Boys Trapped Her - Sinchana_  

JUDGE: anonymous
It's nice that you familiarized us with the main characters on the first chapter but, eh, too much info dumping. Maybe it's just me tho. I'm not really a fan of just plainly describing their looks, whenever I read something like those on a book I literally throw em away. Specially with the part where you used a mirror to describe her lifeless eyes. But it's an improvement compared to those people who literally just describe everything whenever they see a mirror. It's just too convenient. I'm not surprised tho, I see these stuffs whenever i read romance and teen fiction genre here on watty. But aside from the writing style your scores on other criteria are good.

JUDGE: makcheetah
Based on the first 8 chapters:
This was a good book. There were some bumps in the flow due to grammatical errors. The spelling was correct, but the format was not, for example you would right "I and dad" when is should be "Dad and I". Little things like that. The plot line was a little cliche with the bad boy good girl thing. However you interpreted it in a different way, which is good. Good job!