Stagbeetle

Name: StagBeetle

Nice, I like this name a lot because it's a fairly simple one.

Gender: Demi-female

Cool

Age: 74

An old Oc! I like those.

Tribe: HiveWing

Cool

Appearance: A mostly black body aside from an orange fade that starts on her back and ends in a bright orange on her tail. She's also fairly large, being around Kestrel's size. A variety of scars are scattered around her body, specifically her tail and torso. Along with bright golden eyes that give off a serious sort of glow.

Nice description. I like reading look descriptions and seeing what the dragon might look like in my head, and this is pretty clear. But... more detail is always good.

Personality: Like most old dragons, some what sour but despite this is incredibly sympathetic towards most other Hive Wings. And as for SilkWings she mainly sees them eye-to-eye as any other dragon.

Oh my god I love the idea of StagBeetle going around and just being kinda friends with everyone but also, like, being mean to them. I dunno.

Skills: At one point she ran her own shop in bloodworm hive before it was burned down. Then eventually moved to Mantis hive.

Ooh

Powers: Wrist stingers.

Cool cool

Family: Her two daughters and grandchildren whom she cares for dearly.

Hm, it'd be nice to see names and descriptions but whatever, nice work

Residence: Mantis Hive

K.

Backstory: After her children had move out and started families of her own, she took up a writing occupation with her mate, Phasmida (female). The two had been married for around 30 (dragon) years and are living life to the fullest.

Alright! Not much detail so I can't really complain.

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