Name: Alyssa Pines

Type: Human

Colors: Long,brown hair/ Brown eyes

Back story: Alyssa is the older sister of Dipper and Mabel. Two years after the show, the twins come back as 14 years old and they're with their sisters Alyssa. (Alyssa is 4 years older than the twins so she's 18) One day while they're in Gravity Falls Alyssa is near a pond in the forest. She blacks out and finds herself in a strange house. She finds out that the owner of the house is none other than Bill Cipher. Bill captured Alyssa in order to get the journals but soon they both fall in love. Dipper gives Bill the journals to get his sister back and Alyssa goes back to Mabel and Dipper. She is really sad that she can never see Bill again until one day. He comes to the mystery shack in his human form and they reunite.

Thoughts: I really like the Backstory. It has a pretty good balance between good and bad things happening. I also like how the backstory ended, because it felt almost like the story was complete. The only thing I could find wrong with this oc is the same thing that I said about your mlp oc. Why did bill have to come in his human form? Did he not want to get caught by dipper and Mabel? Why didn't Alyssa go with them to gravity falls  with them those 2 years. Other than that, I really like this oc.

Rating: 9/10