Cover Judge: Not very high quality...title is written with bulky font; there's an ambiguous face smack dab in the middle of the cover that won't tell us anything about the story...

Blurb Judge: Okay. The idea is interesting, let's see how you play it.

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Chapters are very long. You started out nicely, but then it kinda drags on in a monotone way.

I mean, the main character died and went back to life in a single chapter. The suspense that you could play with dissipates.

Summary: Sorry if this is real short, it was kind of heavy, you don't seem to take the idea to the full potential. Also, lightening up text could help.