RESULTS- FAN-FICTION
The results of Fanfiction Genre are here!
Special special thanks to our judges-

Jane's Dream by Seong_Grace
●Title 4/5
●Cover 5/5
●Starting 7/10
●Plot 7/10
●Flow 3/10
●Characters 8/10
●Genre Relevance 5/10
●Enjoyment 3/5
Total 39/60
Let someone proofread your book as you writing is a bit messy. Just 8 chapters so far but potential- keep it up.
Star Wars Descendant of Evil by CroodsGirl
●Title 5/5
●Cover 4/5
●Starting 8/10
●Plot 9/10
●Flow 9/10
●Characters 9/10
●Genre Relevance 5/5
●Enjoyment 5/5
Total 54/60
As a fan of star wars it was easy to digest the plot. I was hoping for more cinematic Cover as this is a star wars fanfic. The Plot is good, the author carefully developed the characters and I liked the flow of the story.
The Prince's Heart by GirlOfAPearl
●Title 4/5
●Cover 4/5
●Starting 9/10
●Plot 8/10
●Flow 6/10
●Characters 9/10
●Genre Relevance 5/5
●Enjoyment 5/5
Total 50/60
It's not easy to pronounce these names but the writer did well. Regarding on Plot its kinda slow and dragged. Also no need to put full stop after Miss because miss is a full term. If you do want to use it, you can use Ms. instead.
When His Heart Felt Love by ViniShah2
● Title - 5/5
● Cover - 5/5
● Opening - 9/10
● Plot - 8.5/10
● Flow- 8.5/10
● Characters - 8/10
● Genre relevance - 5/5
● Enjoyment - 4/5
Total- 53/60
This story has a great potential, it just needs little finishing touches. The flow at the
end was lil off sync and I think you can add a little bit more plottwist to keep the
suspense on. Keep it up.
In The Middle Of The Night by sparkles_shimmer
● Title - 5/5
● Cover - 3/5
● Opening - 8.5/10
● Plot - 8/10
● Flow- 8/10
● Characters - 6.5/10
● Genre relevance - 4/5
● Enjoyment - 3.5/5
Total- 46.5/60
The cover needs to be changed as soon as possible because the font is barely visible.
The characters are yet to show their true nature, so far it's good. All the best.
Love In Jeopardy by Armyxbts_oneheart
● Title - 5/5
● Cover - 4/5
● Opening - 9.5/10
● Plot - 9/10
● Flow- 8.5/10
● Characters - 9/10
● Genre relevance - 5/5
● Enjoyment - 4.5/5
Total- 54.5/60
I really enjoyed reading the story. It has a great storyline, although the flow felt a bit
offsync in some chapters but it's nothing major. Keep it up.
The Heir To My Heart by Gukmajins
● Title - 5/5
● Cover - 4/5
● Opening - 9.5/10
● Plot - 9/10
● Flow- 9.5/10
● Characters - 8/10
● Genre relevance - 4/5
● Enjoyment - 4.5/5
Total- 53.5/60
The story is really great, just the characters need a little more emotions in them and a
few minor grammatical mistakes are needed to be taken care of. All the best.
Let go by strawberry1d
● Title - 5/5
● Cover - 3.5/5
● Opening - 8.5/10
● Plot - 8.5/10
● Flow- 9/10
● Characters - 8/10
● Genre relevance - 5/5
● Enjoyment - 4/5
Total- 51.5/60
You have a good storyline but it looks little cliché. The cover is too basic, don't
hesitate to contact a good graphic designer if you need any help. Also the characters
look a little robotic, try to add some more emotions. All the best.

FIRST
Love In Jeopardy by Armyxbts_oneheart
SECOND
Star Wars Descendant of Evil by CroodsGirl
THIRD
The Heir To My Heart by Gukmajins
Consolation
When His Heart Felt Love by ViniShah2
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