Hi

I'm back with an Udaan ff as I'm hating it not because of the death of Suraj or the love of RagKor, but because of the makers of the serial. There is no justice left, Imli had done crimes and is coming out of the jail like if nothing happened? What is the message of Udaan? I can't see it, by the way a woman has the right to move on, even if he is a lookalike of her late husband.

For me Raghav can't be Suraj they are two different individuals! If he turns out to be Suraj, they have to explain, how.

So ending with my Blabla....

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The story starts after SuKor return from RV, they have returned to Azaadghanj.

Suraj was looking at her, "Chakor come, there are a few waiting for you. They will be so happy seeing you."

Chakor looked at him, "who?" She said looking at him, while they stood out the bus, "Chakor the villagers and your parents, as well as Imli."

Chakor nods, "haan they are waiting for my return, but Imli. I have to talk to her first."

Suraj nods, "okay fine, but not now, first meet your parents."

Chakor shook her head, "no!" She said, making him confused, "why?" He asked and she smiles.

"First I will meet my town."

"You will never forget Azaadghanj, right?" He asked and she nods, "never!"

Suddenly a crowd of people surrounded them, "Chakor!!" They said coming near here, "Suraj babu ne apna waada nibahaya aur Chakor ki wapis leke aaya hai {Suraj has come back with Chakor, he kept on his promise}."

Suraj smiles, "haan look your Chakor is back."

Chakor looked at him, "Suraj you did what?" She questioned him.

"You promised them to bring me back?"

Suraj nods, "but not only for them, for me too." He smiles and she hits him playfully, they villagers asked them to go into the village.

Suraj was holding her with care and love, they entered the village and looked for Kasturi and Bhuvaan. The villagers were following them, caring and kindly keeping them surrounded like a wall, they were with them.

"Kasturi!" A woman of the crowd shouted, "dehk hum kissi humare saath leh aaye hain {Look who is with us}" She shouts and Kasturi as well as Bhuvaan turned.

Both were looking at them, "Chakoriya ke Bapu is that our Chakor?"

Bhuvaan nods, "Haan Kasturi, it's Chakor our daughter Chakor is back."

They rushed to their daughter and hugged her tightly.

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That is all for today

I will make some changes, you will read them through the story.

It will have some similarities to the Udaan story, but with major changes.

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